導語：奧數網給同學們匯總了小學英語作文范文及點評，希望同學們的英語學習有所幫助。以下為范文原文：

　　Jack is seven years old. He lives in an ordinary family, unlike other child, he is much mature and knows to be grateful to his parents. Jack always wants to give his mother a surprise, because he knows his mother has done so much for the family. So he buys a flower and send to his mother. The mother is so moved and feel very happy.

　　杰克是個七歲的孩子。他生在一個普通的家庭,不像其他孩子,他更成熟,知道感激他的父母。杰克總是想給他媽媽一個驚喜,因為他知道他的母親為這個家庭付出了很多。所以他買了花,送給他的母親。母親很感動,也覺得很高興。