7.My Days of the week

　　I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to schoolat seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday toSaturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. Idon’t have to go to school on school, and I like to goswimming on that day.

　　【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　這篇作文的題目是“我的一周”，小作者沒有說(shuō)一些空話，而是從自己的親身經(jīng)歷寫起，敘述了自己一周七天的所作所為，并特別強(qiáng)調(diào)了星期天的喜好，寫得自然、流暢。

　　小朋友們寫作文時(shí)要注意人稱及謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的變化，要依據(jù)提示，結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際，寫自己身邊熟悉的事情。